illicit relationship

I’m editing my previous chapter to make it more readable.but I don’t know if my grammar will be better or not because I’ve been learning english by myself but I’ll try my best to make my grammar better.this is my first time writing a story so I hope I won’t make too many mistake.WARNING: THIS NOVEL HAS BAD GRAMMAR SO PLEASE DON’T COMPLAIN ABOUT GRAMMAR IF YOU DECIDE READING THIS NOVEL LATER.if you want to give me a bad review, I’m fine with it, I won’t get angry or delete your review but please point out where did I do wrong and if you could, give me a suggestion. this is the first time I write a story so I know that I will make a lot of mistake in this novel, with your suggestion, I can make a better story or maybe I can become a better human. I’m open to critics and suggestion.WARNING: mature and incest content.if you’re against mature and incest content, then this novel is not for yousynopsis:Huang Chen, a handsome young man died in a car accident and suddenly woke up in a body he did not recognize. what will he do and what will happen to him after he takes over his new body?I’m not the owner of the cover, I took it from Pinterest so if you’re the owner of the cover and want me to take it down, please tell me and I’ll immediately take the cover down.